The Official Writing Challenge
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Classic, funny, beautiful! Sounds like how my mum feels about camping with my dad! I could visualise your characters really well!
You have a unique, quirky writing style in this piece -- I like it! The descriptive language makes it very vivid.
Loved it! Laughed a few times and identified a few times. Especially loved the many names the husband took on.
This was a very cute, wonderful, and delightful story. Enjoyed reading. God bless ya, littlelight
Very well told. Bravo! This one deserves some winning credit.
I could see it, I was there with you. your writing is very visual. Thank you.
Well communicated sense of place and your character's feelings. Liked her sense of humour and her changing perspective on her husband. A change in tense in the first line and some typos/omissions suggest it might be a good idea to get a friend to do a proof read before you submit.
Great! and wonderful humor :) and smart man... "I held out my hand. M and M’s and the kiss saved his life."