The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
Classic, funny, beautiful! Sounds like how my mum feels about camping with my dad! I could visualise your characters really well!
You have a unique, quirky writing style in this piece -- I like it! The descriptive language makes it very vivid.
07/18/05
Loved it! Laughed a few times and identified a few times. Especially loved the many names the husband took on.
07/20/05
This was a very cute, wonderful, and delightful story. Enjoyed reading. God bless ya, littlelight
07/22/05
Very well told. Bravo! This one deserves some winning credit.
I could see it, I was there with you. your writing is very visual. Thank you.
07/22/05
Well communicated sense of place and your character's feelings. Liked her sense of humour and her changing perspective on her husband. A change in tense in the first line and some typos/omissions suggest it might be a good idea to get a friend to do a proof read before you submit.
07/23/05
Great! and wonderful humor :) and smart man... "I held out my hand. M and M’s and the kiss saved his life."