The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/08
I like the way this is formatted into a journal. Very unique and interesting to read. It reminded me so much of what it was like when my boys were still little. Well done!
11/01/08
LOL Thanks for the warning before I become the mom who tries to do everything! Great job!
11/01/08
Whew boy! Just reading this left me tired--and a little sad that all those bustling childhood parties and stuff to do are in the past. But, I like the MC's idea: Christmas in the tropics! Sand and sun...ahh.
11/01/08
Christmas on the beach. A sandy beach sounds really good right now. A party on a cruise ship, someone else doing the cooking! Oh yeah, count me in. I enjoyed this countdown and the twist at the end.
11/01/08
Well, you wanted to be red inked, so...it was a nice idea to encourage busy moms but I found it a bit boring...
11/02/08
My parents have done this (LOL both of them!). Good fit for the topic.
11/02/08
Laced with humor...I thought the ending was stronger than the beginning. Good title.
11/02/08
Another journal entry, I love it! For a while I thought it might be one of the daughters reading, and was surprised to see it was Mom. Maybe my eyes were just playing tricks on me.
Great story.
11/06/08
Sounds like my Christmas scedule--well the first part,not the cruise. Good job. This was fun.