The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/08
I was frozen on the stairs right along with EJ! Yes, this one drew me and in and kept me all the way through. Fun!
11/01/08
You captured the childlike excitement of Christmas perfectly. I so enjoyed this piece, I read it out loud to my family.
11/03/08
You painted the scene so perfectly I had to hold my breath while I was reading so as not to make a sound!
11/05/08
Well stuctured. I could see the little boy sneaking down the stairs and feel the adventure and suspense. Way to bring it full-circle as that boy later watches his own sons.
11/06/08
Way to go Anita!! I'm so proud of you!!!
11/06/08
Excellent! I love how you ended it with the twins! Double the trouble.Congratulations!!
11/06/08
It just dawned on me that EJ could be my favorite kitchen make-over guy. Congrats on 3rd place.