The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/08
Definitely my favourite so far. Humorous, earthy, full of surprises, yet resonating with the joy of Christmas. Very well done.
11/02/08
Excellent voice, and your descriptions were so real. This is definitely my favorite so far.
Very creative writing, good voice for an uneducated teen.
11/03/08
Masterful writing which captured the scene and the emotions perfectly. I was captivated from beginning to end.
Very cool! I loved the creativity.
Lovely story. Really enjoyed it.
Love,
Norms
Great story of two people loving another with Jesus' arms.
11/05/08
Awesome characterizations in this story. The emotions and voice of the MC are clearly written--and her benefactors are well-fleshed out in just a few sentences. Lots of good Christmas cheer, in spite of the circumstances, in this one!
Very good. I love your MC. Her voice is very authentic. I wanted to read more about her and wish you had more words to desribe the window. That could have been funny (and I love window shopping!) Nice job.