The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
Delightful!
07/18/05
Cute! Nice twist having Ben be a bear. A very nice little story.
very cute story
07/20/05
This is my favorite I believe. (Hard to choose.) So, funny with the cutest twist. Good writing and outcome of the story. Loved it! God bless ya, littlelight
07/22/05
Cute story, loved the clues, the twist and the footnote.
I loved this! I was hooked from the beginning and didn't know Ben was the bear until you revealed it, but when you did, his scouting a taken campsite and fixating on graham crackers and marshmallows made sense! Great fun, lovely twist. Awesome writing.
07/22/05
Applauding, delightful.
07/23/05
Fun! I love the twist too. Well done!
07/23/05
Chuckle, giggle, laugh - refreshing and very creative!
07/23/05
LOL -wonderful!! I wonder if I saw that family of bears last time I was at the zoo? How long ago was that??? We're planning a trip soon -we'll tell them "Hi".
Let me add a Delightful, and second that with Adorable...Well Done!
07/26/05
Hi Lynda. I'm just popping in very quickly to let you know that "The Perfect Campsite" was in the semi-finals for the Camping Challenge. Well done! Love always, Deb