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This is delightful! And what a wonderful way to propose!
What a lucky (or should that be blessed?) girl!
An adorable story. I enjoyed it.
Awww...this is so sweet and romantic. Just the way every woman would want to be proposed to! Lovely story.
I loved this, very romantic. he's a keeper, that's for sure! Good writing, you kept me interested in finding out how it ended.
This is the romance genre done right. I would not say that romance is my favorite genre, but your story engaged me and put a big smile on my face. I was anxious to find out what gifts that he was going to present to her next. I also like your wordplay on the Twelve Days of Christmas. Good job with this. :)
How creative! I loved all the small inexpensive ways he deomstr5ated his love for her. It makes me think about how to inject a little romance into my own marriage.
Total delight!
I love daisies! What a perfect flower and such romance too. Impeccable!
I can't imagine a more perfect countdown to Christmas, or a more beautiful way to receive a marriage proposal, though I must admit I didn't see that coming till the very end! Very well done indeed!
Wow! What a romantic guy. I love Gerber daisies and I love the ending. You having me really liking and rooting for this couple! Great job. I'd love to read more about them.
So sweet--what a romantic! Love the details. I suspected the ending by about the middle, but that didn't make it any less sweet.
I absolutely LOVE your story!
Great story. That's the way it should be - sweep her off feet. Through thirty years of marriage I've found that it's not what a man does for the one he loves but rather how much did he have to go out of his way to it. This is very nice. Well done.
This is WONNNNNderful. I am a sucker for romance, and this melted my heart. Extremely well-written and perfect for the topic. Great job.
This story is absolutely adorable, touching, sweet, and what we ALL want from our spouses, no matter where we live or how old we are. I just bought the LOVE DARE book, and you gave me some ideas.. thanks!