The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/08
What a heartwarming tear jerker. I love that the dad surprised little John Jacob and joined him in the drum/song. Precious.
Goosebumps on my arms and the back of my neck as I read the end of this one! Honestly! God Bless you for writing this feel good story about our soldiers and their families left behind at their deployment. Excellent!
I'm undone! Even though I somewhat expected to see Dad surprise John Jacob at the end, I was still caught off guard.
Impeccable!
11/06/08
Awww....I was so hoping he would show up, and you didn't disappoint with this one! Cute story!