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10/30/08
this poem has a really nice tempo. It was fun to read and i like the little tongue in cheek pokes at what the season has become. A very subtle reminder...
10/31/08
A very good ending (and so true!)! I liked your sarcastic wit in this poem.
10/31/08
This fits the topic quite well. My sentiments exactly about all the store displays.
11/03/08
Some very good turns of phrase here. My favourite was the line about expletives competing with the music in the air. You have managed to make a serious point in a very humourous way indeed. Well done!
11/06/08
Congrats on Highly Commended. This is magnificent!
11/06/08
I felt the build up toward Christmas... very cool poem! Congrats on doing so well, Holly! YEAH!
11/06/08
I liked the simple truth here and the rhythm of the poem. Congratulations on being Highly Commended.