The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this! Thanks for a beautiful story of Christmas for those who might otherwise go without.
10/23/08
Great story. A unique take on the topic.
10/23/08
Excellent sense of time and place. You painted the scene well and put me in the picture. Thanks for such a creative piece.
Wonderful, creative, touching. Thanks!
Entrancing story! Wonderful details, especially liked the bagging and soaking of the geese to keep them fresh. Would have loved more to this story - where did this fantastic new chief jailer come from? why was the cook no longer working in the palace? Hope you have the opportunity to let us see these characters again. :)
WOW...
I loved this story of the kindly jailer. Very captivating.
This is wonderful! You had me captivated with you descriptions of Lawrence and his surroundings. Great job!
10/29/08
Good writing. Very original.
10/30/08
Very unique and creative take on the topic. Nice work!
The setting of this piece was very unique, and it has a wonderful ending. Always a pleasure reading your work, Lynne. :)