The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 783 times
Member Comments
I could picture the kitchen filled with memories and love. A well-written piece filled with tender emotions.
Wonderful story about a caring family.
What a great Christmas story!
Just beautiful, and full of love and wistfulness and delight and hope.
Just beautiful! This is so well-written and full of description and emotion.
This is so poignant. I love the images "the small tin box on the counter" and the "large bay window" with the "bare oaks and hickories" standing "against the thick morning fog." I love the hope-filled contrast of your ending "until he could gaze upon the pasture and thills and the mountains beyond". Beautiful words!
The slow, tender pace of this is just perfect. I felt like I was there,in the kitchen. All the details and dialogue were so realistic. Great job!
The love in this family drew me in and held me. I found myself wiping tears, which rarely happens from a story. Their memories of their mother were so tender.
This really hit me, especially about my recipe box. It's probably a discussion I need to have with my kids. I hope they'll want to preserve some of our old traditions.