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Lovely, heartwarming story - and the ending is perfect.
This is absolutely lovely. I felt like I was right there with you, and your last paragraph was absolutely wonderful - perfect, as Debbie said. Last line especially.
This is a very special story. Thank you for sharing:)
The symbolism you used for your grandmother is just part of the reason this is a wonderful character study.
What a grandmother, what a relationship, what a memory, what a tribute!
What a tender story. It's written as a true memory. I love the detail of the apron and how MC saw her grandma, and her life lessons in them. Wonderful!
a beautiful tribute... you were blessed to have your grandmother... anticipating the reunion you will have someday!
This is a beautiful story, and a wonderful tribute to your grandmother. Thanks for sharing it.
Very charming tribute! You write very well - I was able to visualize everything. Nice work. :)