The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/08
What a message! Wowzer. Great job revealing the duplicity of our hearts during the holiday season.
Wow! What insight.... I kept thinking of Jesus' words, "Blessed are the pure in heart." This really gives a lot of food for thought. Convicting.
10/25/08
Oh--such a wonderful message and expertly told. I would love to see this illustrated.
10/27/08
Deliciously frantic.
Felt George's ending needed a more definite conclusion, but the rest of the story was fun and a great moral tale
This would be a wonderful children's story. They'd love the story and get the point, just like I did.
A great thought provoking Christmas/everyday story just before the busyness of the holidays.
The lesson in this piece is what stood out to me. Kind of felt like one of Aesop's Fables. Very well done! I love all of your writings!