The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/08
A nice seasonal take on the topic. I'm British but I've just come back from a holiday in America - you have the most gorgeous pies. Thanks - enjoyed (both your story and your pies).
10/28/08
Wow, you took me in an unexpected direction. I enjoyed your description of Maria's baking procedure. I could picture it. Your story is sweet with a great ending.
A creative take on the topic. The last few lines felt a bit rushed after so much detail in the first paragraphs. But, there's a good message here.