The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/08
Oohh, I could feel your MC slowly transforming both emotionally and physically. The ending was perfect, and not expected. Excellent.
10/25/08
An excellent story and a powerful reminder of the soldiers who serve courageously.
10/27/08
I could feel the emotion in this. I'm glad you left us with a ray of hope. Nice job!
10/28/08
Your story was developed perfectly for the wonderfully hopeful ending.
10/28/08
The great pace and attention to detail really draws the reader into Alex, not just into the story. Wonderful.
10/28/08
This one tugged at my heartstrings. I get the impression he was wounded in the war. I love how you put us into his head, and how the love of family, and celebrating Christmas with them gave him hope to try again. A testimony to the power of love. Great job.
10/28/08
Oh man, that was good. I loved it! Alex captured my heart. What a transformation at the end. I did not expect that.
Nice job!
10/30/08
Great ending line! Talk about grabbing our attention! I liked this piece very much.