The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/08
hahahaha. :)

loved it.
10/25/08
Ooooooh my! What a RIOT! Great voice and character development too. I wanna be in your mind some time (LOL maybe!)
10/25/08
Great job! Creatively relating a heartbreaking siuation to this topic was very effective.
10/25/08
The above comment somehow got on the wrong entry. My apologies.
10/27/08
I once made a green cake on the basis that the rest of my family would turn their noses up and I'd get to enjoy it all by myself. Sadly my ploy didn't work!
I could just see the green teeth! Now, every time I eat red velvet cake, I'll think green poo and grin.
Very creative but glad we're not neighbors :)