The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the voice in this piece. I have never tried snow pudding, but it sounds delicious. Actually, I had never heard of it at all before reading this, so it's something that I would love to try and make (although I'm sure I would fail many times before perfecting it like your relatives did).

As you probably know, you had left your name at the top. The judges like the entries to remain anonymous until hinting time, but I'm sure you caught that after you submitted. I nearly left my name in one time too. Also, I noticed one spot where it said "desert" instead of "dessert," but I'm not trying to pick. Those are minor things that did not detract at all from this great story.

Thank you for sharing this interesting story about an interesting dessert. :)