The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a sweet story. Luken is a good man. This is very well written and you had me from the first word. Wonderful job!
10/17/08
Great twist. I was really wondering what he was up to--so glad his intentions were "honorable." Your descriptions were beautiful. I felt like I was right there. Excellent.