The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
I think this is absolutely great. Thank you so much for your gifted effort and posting it for us to read.
Your "Piney" was so noble that the only thing I would have liked added to the story is that the family dug up a root ball so Piney would be planted again after Christmas. :)
10/19/08
This is so sweet! I love it. I felt like I "knew"--and certainly liked--Piney very quickly. Wonderful descriptions. I could see this beautifully illustrated and published as a children's book!
I liked the unique take. This was a very nice read.
10/19/08
This is lovely. I adore Piney, and what a dear lesson. I could see this illustrated.
What a sweet, original story. Like someone else said, You should write this out as a children's book. I'd read it to my kids. Very nice!
Aw, I liked this one! Good ole Piney!
10/22/08
So special and teaching that good things do take time! Your grandkids will love it!
10/23/08
Very cute!