The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
Excellent as always! Keep it up!
07/18/05
It is so terrible that there just isn't enough words to post the whole chapter--will be on pins and needles. Very nice--I seen one itsy thing Sheri said--and I think you meant to add a "W" to "as" to make it WAS. (typo) See if you can find it. (LOL) God bless ya, littlelight
07/18/05
Okay, now I have to go back and read one through five. I'm intrigued. Just another word you need to check: vein. Perhaps you meant vain? Tres bien! In His Grip, KC
07/20/05
Good job as usuall! I'm enjoying the series!
07/21/05
Now this is an interesting development - the missionary from Ethiopia sans husband. Hmmm. Shame that this week's topic was 'car trip' and not 'mountains', otherwise I can see a mad chase through the mountains - but you had to walk the last 5km, so...... Well done. Looking forward to next week's car trip. (Maybe Monique is in a car???)
07/22/05
Captivating! Can't wait for the continuation.
07/22/05
You have me hooked - I will have to go and read all the other parts now! Well done. The dialogue works really well.
07/22/05
Great job, Dub. Just got caught up. I like English speaking Sheri! :)
07/22/05
Another enthralling episode. Sheri’s introduction means an opportunity for more English. Phew. Too much French gets in the way of the story for me. (‘I’ missing in the penultimate paragraph, Dub.)
07/23/05
I, too, have to go back and read the whole thing. When finished, I hope you post the story in the "general submissions" section so we can enjoy from beginning to end, uninterrupted. :-) Great job!
Blessings, Lynda
07/23/05
I agree with Lynda, hope you post it all together when done. Love the mystery and suspense!
07/23/05
Again, an enjoyable story -can't wait to read more :)