The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
Awww... so tender. I especially liked the dialogue between grandmother and grandson during the baking. There were a few punctuation mistakes towards the end. All in all, a lovely story.
A lovely story with a beautiful ending.
Norms
10/23/08
Oh, my goodness,,, I was getting a lump in my throat along with the grandmother! "Wow" is all I can say.