The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
What a clever idea--an end-times Christmas story, and one that takes great advantage of one of the most beautiful of Advent carols to give it an extra, poignant layer of meaning. Excellent!
10/09/08
This is my favorite of this week's entries. It took me until the end to realize it's set in the end times - so well done. :)
10/13/08
I like the integration of Judaism and Christianity, how the end times will bring them all together.

I like to offer creative critique at all times (though I searched harder in this piece to find something): I would encourage you to double check punctuation (commas and apostrophes). It will help the flow go a bit more smoothly.

Creatively, well-written.
The story is great. I especially am enjoying the inclusion of the words to these songs I grew up on. Many of them I heard sung, and never really new the words; so it's a delight to finally see what's really being said in those verses.