The Official Writing Challenge
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What a clever idea--an end-times Christmas story, and one that takes great advantage of one of the most beautiful of Advent carols to give it an extra, poignant layer of meaning. Excellent!
This is my favorite of this week's entries. It took me until the end to realize it's set in the end times - so well done. :)
I like the integration of Judaism and Christianity, how the end times will bring them all together.

I like to offer creative critique at all times (though I searched harder in this piece to find something): I would encourage you to double check punctuation (commas and apostrophes). It will help the flow go a bit more smoothly.

Creatively, well-written.
The story is great. I especially am enjoying the inclusion of the words to these songs I grew up on. Many of them I heard sung, and never really new the words; so it's a delight to finally see what's really being said in those verses.