The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/08
I really liked this. Thanks. Keep writing and God bless. Olivia
10/10/08
Great story. Really liked the ending.
10/11/08
I'd forgotten about that old spiritual--thanks for reminding me!

10/13/08
Touching story.

There are a few punctuation errors, especially commas (some in wrong places, some not where they could be). Brush up on those and your story will flow more smoothly. Be careful not to fall into run-on sentences though!

Nicely created.
10/13/08
Touching story.

There are a few punctuation errors, especially commas (some in wrong places, some not where they could be). Brush up on those and your story will flow more smoothly. Be careful not to fall into run-on sentences though!

Nicely created.