The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/08
Singing and service—now that's the spirit of Christmas. Lovely story.
10/10/08
You made Lorna so very real. Very good story!
10/11/08
I loved the voice! What a hoot! The details of her getting to her walker were great, too. I loved the whole thing!
10/13/08
What a masterful way of using static to represent the fogginess of Lorna's mind and situation, which was all cleared up by Jesus (the body of Christ) showing up at her door to encourage her with singing and help her with service. It reads like a movie.
Your idea of static was used very effectively in your story. I loved the voice of your mc.
10/16/08
Wow! Congratulations on your EC win. What a unique approach to the topic, Laura. I loved the voice and everything about this. AWESOME!
Congratulations, girlfriend! I love this story. It is so touching and realistic. Great job! Your writing always blesses me.
10/16/08
Are you sure you're not an old lady with a tennis-ball bottomed walker? Good descriptions!
10/16/08
Congratulations, Laura! I loved this story. Didn't know it was yours:) Woohoo!
10/16/08
Congratulations, Laura! Great stuff--wonderful characterization.
10/16/08
Beautiful writing on this wonderful story, Laura! Congrats with your EC placing! ... um, do you think those carolers could come by my house? :)
10/16/08
Well done, Laura. And such wonderful descriptive details there, which really help to paint a vivid image of the scene.
10/25/08
Congratulations LauraLee on getting Highly Commended in the highly competitive Masters Level!