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10/11/08
Extremely original! And a great reminder that we're always singing for the King--and that He can make even the non-Christian aspect of Christmas glorify Himself. I love this.
10/13/08
I absolutely loved this! The creativity alone deserves mention. Whether intentional or not, I enjoyed the alliterations in the first paragraph.

Nothing jumped out at me as grammatically incorrect, but there's never any harm in double checking comma usage!

An easy read, a fun story. I appreciate how it captures the unconditional love of Jesus and a unique perspective. Well done!
10/13/08
Wonderful take on the topic! Great Job!
Creative. I liked it.