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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Christmas Carols/Carolling (10/02/08)

TITLE: Eternal Chirstmas Carol
By Mary Alice Bowles
10/08/08


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The Eternal Christmas Carol

Oh sweet Christmas Carol
Light up my life with sound
Let Jesus music fill every nook and cranny
Of a world so out of bounds

Let me hear them ringing
In every corner of the earth
They teach about My Jesus
And the purpose of his birth

Oh little town of Bethlehem
Hear the angels sing
Thousands of ten thousands
Came to see a King

Let the Christmas Carol surround me
Please saturate my brain
I’ll raise my hands and worship
I will sang, sang, and sang

I’ll sing a little mix of Christmas Carols
I will add a sound from Zion
I think I hear the roar
Of a Beautiful Big Big Lion

Oh bless me Christmas Carol
Bless me with the Prince of Peace
Let his mercy wash me
I feel such sweet release

Sweet wonderful Holy Ghost
Let the sound of Christmas Carols prove
That Jesus came to earth
To make us all brand new

When all my days are over
And I bow before the King
I will sing a brand new carol
That the angels cannot sing

Let me sing the eternal carol
Jesus, lover of my soul
I praise your Holy Name
I thank you Precious Jesus for making me whole


I LOVE YOU JESUS
THANKS FOR BEING MY BEST FRIEND.


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Jan Ackerson 10/11/08
Wonderful sentiments here!

The meter needs a tweak here and there to make it a bit more consistent.

I love the title, and the whole idea of an eternal carol.


   
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