The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
Well written and a reminder that a child's innocence can cause great joy.
10/11/08
Very sweet.

The pacing was great in the first half--toward the end, it seemed a bit rushed. It may be as easy a fix as breaking some of the longer paragraphs into shorter ones.

Children especially will enjoy this tale.
10/11/08
Thank goodness for the sweet innocence of children. This is a heartwarming story that shows how God uses each of us for His purpose.