The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/08
Excellent job of building suspense in the reader!
This was a true testiment of God's greatness. I especially enjoyed your depictions of God's saving grace gearing into action every time something terrible wanted to happen to the main character's baby. It reminds me of the fight between God and satan. And the Lord wins every time, for His glory and for the benefit of His children.