The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/08
Christmas carol do a great job of telling the gospel, and I'm not surprised the boy was drawn in by the carolling. I love the "epilogue" - nice ending.
I love the lesson woven into the story and the ending is perfect. Great characterization, too.
I felt like the whole story was wrapped around the peace in the youth pastor's heart that enabled him to minister to the young man on the motorcycle. Excellent story.
Nice job. We need not be afraid of those rough looking guys when we walk with God. I expected the ending, and was pleasantly rewarded.
Your story drew me in and held me. Well done. I really like the ending.
Excellent work. I cried.
10/16/08
Nice work! One teeny tiny correction - it should be "why were his feet still walking" instead of "was". I liked this one very much - a neat teen witnessing story.
Good story Gerry, you never know what will happen when you go carolling. I must admit, it ended like I hoped it would. Well done.