The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/08
Christmas carol do a great job of telling the gospel, and I'm not surprised the boy was drawn in by the carolling. I love the "epilogue" - nice ending.
10/13/08
I love the lesson woven into the story and the ending is perfect. Great characterization, too.
10/14/08
I felt like the whole story was wrapped around the peace in the youth pastor's heart that enabled him to minister to the young man on the motorcycle. Excellent story.
10/14/08
Nice job. We need not be afraid of those rough looking guys when we walk with God. I expected the ending, and was pleasantly rewarded.
10/14/08
Your story drew me in and held me. Well done. I really like the ending.
10/15/08
Excellent work. I cried.
10/16/08
Nice work! One teeny tiny correction - it should be "why were his feet still walking" instead of "was". I liked this one very much - a neat teen witnessing story.
10/16/08
Good story Gerry, you never know what will happen when you go carolling. I must admit, it ended like I hoped it would. Well done.