The Official Writing Challenge
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With the vivid descriptions, it's easy to visualize the scenes as they unfold. I especially like the opening paragraph.
Your description is excellent as you show the heart of Christ through the carolers.
Excellent writing! Excellent story! Excellent ending! Thank you for sharing this story about the joy of giving. Christ commands us to aid the widow and the orphan, and your story demonstrates this command in action. Thanks for sharing.