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Very thoughtful and emotion filled story. I enjoyed the happy ending.
10/10/08
Unique approach to the topic!

I think you meant "petals" instead of "pedals", and I have a hard time believing that a fiance wouldn't know the details of his fiancee's parent's death.

I love the ending very much!