The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
I loved this! How very creative. My favorite line was "Who packed for this trip anyway?" That was great. The whole devotional was terrific. Thanks!
07/18/05
That was truly an awesome reflection and a great comparison. Nicely written. Get rid of the heavy load! God bless ya, littlelight
07/18/05
Okay, I'll have to agree that "Who packed for this trip ..." is my favorite part as well. You seemed to lose me a bit in the middle, but brought me back when you said God wants all of me ... then it started making more sense. A great devotional. Thanks for sharing. In His Grip,
KC
07/18/05
This was awesome! I'm not usually a big fan of non-fiction, but this just made my day! I say it's a winner. Good job!
07/20/05
You blessed my day with joy, pure joy! Rita
07/21/05
Bravo, Bravo, Bravo!
nuf said.
07/21/05
Absolutely beautiful! Keep up the good writing!
07/22/05
Very nice job! Good insights.
07/22/05
Great, unforced, devotional piece. Well done.
07/23/05
Excellent! Refreshing and very good comparison to our spiritual walk towards maturity. Enjoyed it much.
07/23/05
Awesome! I loved every line. Great analogy, a pleasure to read all the way through. Thanks.
07/23/05
An effective comparison! I liked the way that things oike pride got to be heavy and were discarded.
07/23/05
Al, you've always got a piece of amazing insight and wisdom to share. Well written and definite food for thought. Thanks for posting. Great writing!
Blessings, Lynda
07/23/05
This hits close to home. Very well done!
07/23/05
It keeps the reader following through and hits him like a brick between the eyes with the lesson - well done!
05/12/06
what were you doing looking in my back pack, I'm glad I have secret pockets. And I'm glad God's helping me to empty mine. It brings a special joy to me when I see others who have yet to unload theirs. Joy that is, that God makes mine extra heavy when I need to get rid of somethings. Should you view my songs and poems, I hpoe God helps you see somethings worth carring along with you. God bless
03/29/07
This is the way a teaching piece should be done!
03/29/07
Excellent lesson taught in an amazingly effective way.
03/29/07
Strong start, and you keep on. This was joy, pure joy!
04/02/07
I enjoyed this vivid illustration of the Christian walk. Thanks for pointing us here. It's inspiring!