The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this story, It is very heart warming.
10/10/08
Awwwwwwwww!
10/11/08
Hard to see the keybard for the tears...
10/12/08
Beautiful story of how love needs to persevere. Thanks!
10/13/08
A well written entry. I'm glad they decided to revisit Justin.
10/13/08
What a sweet story. Love never fails. You have a lovely gift of describing what you see.
10/13/08
A great story! Your descriptions are so clear, and the phrasing lovely. The changing of the seasons is especially beautiful. I love how the courage of one little girl thawed a cold hard heart. All around excellent!
Excellent descriptions and great message in this enjoyable story.
Great story. Lump still in my throat. Thank God for caring people.
A true expression of how love hopes, endures and believes all things. Thank you for this beautiful and heartwarming story.
Wow. Very touching story. I have tears in my eyes... Well written.
10/15/08
Excellent entry - gives just the right amount of hope! Great work.
10/15/08
Ahhh...how touching! The last line seemed unrealistic, not that it wouldn't been good if old Justing Bradford did pray. Ending with the song would be better. I loved it otherwise!
Your descriptions are masterful, and the idea of the single young caroler was delivered perfectly.
10/15/08
Absolutely lovely! The single caroler staying was perfect. A well-written, heartwarming story. Well done!
Moving and full of what Christmas is. Wonderfully told Mr Whalen!