The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an excellent story--for youth, as well as the "not so young." The characterization is particularly good.
I really enjoyed the plot of this story. Should be in a youth devotional.... Loved how you ended it. Great job!
10/10/08
This felt very real to me. Liked the way the story unwound and it had a happy ending too. Thanks.
Good story and nice descriptive writing. I enjoyed seeing life from Sarah's side. A fun read with a nice positive spin at the end.
This is very well written. I like how you made Sara feel like a real girl, complete with teenage attitude. Great job!
Your MC had a very authentic voice. It's how I would picture a typical teenager being in that situation. Good job with this!