The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/08
Interesting floral allegory--I've never read anything like it before!

This would flow better with closer attention to more regular meter, and I'm not sure how it relates to the topic of "carols".

Nevertheless, it's highly creative, and has some great imagery!
10/10/08
Beautiful.inspiring and creative!