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A very different telling of the story of the shepherds watching their flocks and hearing the angels announcement. I loved the banter between the men. Very enjoyable, well done.
10/09/08
This was wonderful -- a truly wonderful piece! What an excellent way to relate the first Christmas carols ever sung! Excellent job.
10/10/08
I LOVE the idea of the shepherds singing the 23rd Psalm!

I found the present tense a bit discombobulating in this piece. I think it works best for more introspective pieces from one POV.

This had some new "stuff" in it that made it stand out from the typical shepherds' story. Thanks for that!