The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the writing here. And the story read like a CHristmas carol, the details and rythm lending to it. And I enjoyed the weaving of the birth of our Savior Jesus into the story in such a delicate way. Good writing and good job.
10/10/08
Nostalgic and pleasant to read.

Since "memories of Christmas" is a familiar theme of seasonal stories, consider finding an incident to make yours stand out from the rest. And I'm not sure if the title is the best for this piece (avoid well-known phrases).

I got a kick out of the "pianna".