The Official Writing Challenge
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A lovely character study, and a picture of grace on the part of the narrator.

For your readers' ease, please hit an extra "enter" at each paragraph. You might also do a double-check for run-on sentences.

I felt as if I knew Ted by the time I'd finished this story, and I'm richer now for knowing him.
This is a sweet story of acceptance and grace. Loved Ted's innocent and honest behavior throughout.

It flowed nicely, but agree it should be broken into several paragraphs for easier reading.