The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
This stanza really caught my attention, "Each soul he wins gets hellish cheers -- Lost souls create heavenís tears. -- Play your game of life to win, -- Pray yourself away from sin." Your ending is so profound and "cuts to the quick" "Winners, Losers there will be, Judgment Day -- eternity." Nice work on this thought-provoking poem.