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This is very interesting. I had NO idea you were talking about cancer. Good writing!
When I discovered what the MC was fighting at the end, the whole story made a big impact! Very touching story.
What a great analogy! I also had no idea, but the ending was really powerful. Great job!
This is very innovative, though I confess to skipping to the end, and the re-reading carefully in the light of the explanatory notes.
I was very touched by this story since my mom is a lung and breast cancer survivor. Thanks for writing this. Excellent!
Enjoyed the story and loved the twist at the end.
Excellent! I love to be surprised by something at the end. This piece (and the title, too) become loaded with meaning once one reads the last bit. Very well done!
This DEFINITELY has to be published in a cancer newsletter!
The end really slipped up on me here; then the whole story came alive.
What a wonderful way to explain chemotherapy to a child.