The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/05
You express some good thoughts here. I did feel like the piece was a little sporadic and didn't flow quite as smoothly as it could have. Also, it may be just me but the word "angry" or "anger" was used so often I found myself distracted by it.
I hope you don't mind me pointing out those things. Overall, there was a lot said and you made some excellent points.
Blessings, Lynda
Yes, I agree with Lynda. You did make some good points here. God bless you.