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I really liked the last line when he asked if she wanted to "start over." That was cool, since they'd both set their tokens on START. This is really ON TOPIC and I enjoyed it very much. Good job!
You did a great portrayal of what can hit couples at this age, and the choice to believe in God' faithfulness to see you through.
I enjoyed this very much. Your portrayal of this couple is so believable, and I love the way the wife was prepared with scripture for the "blow" they were dealt.
09/21/08
A true to life story for the topic and very well-written. The message was the best part of all.
I enjoyed reading about this couple's game of life, especially the way the Lord prepared the wife for change.