The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
This is an interesting combination of story and devotional...I found myself wanting to know more about the main character.
09/19/08
I liked the hinds feet illustration. I appreciated the message about life being a journey with learning curves to build character and equip us for heaven. I think your comparison to a baby, running "ahead of our parents, often stumbling and falling" is good. Nice enhanced devotional.
Hi there,
Really liked this piece Ken.
I like your descriptions, makes me feel as if I am there with you.
Love,
Norms