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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: The Game of Life (09/11/08)

TITLE: Trivial Pursuit
By LauraLee Shaw
09/17/08


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T he game of life is a trivial pursuit without Jesus at the center of it.
H e will lead you through each twister and turn, His
E xample as your guide. Yes, the
 
G ame of life is a scrabbled maze without Jesus as your solitairy gaze. It is
A s you focus on Him that your path becomes straight and your
M ind finally unboggles from the aggravation and struggles.
E veryone should know that the game
 
O f life is a risky operation without Jesus Christ as his
F irm foundation. Otherwise, he’s no clue what trouble he’s gotten himself into.
 
L isten…the game of life is a sorry one
I ndeed without Jesus in the lead.
F orget your own strategy, it will leave you feeling
E mpty. That would be a tragedy.

So give up the trivial pursuit.

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”You're blessed when you stay on course, walking steadily on the road revealed by God.
   You're blessed when you follow His directions, doing your best to find Him.
   That's right—you don't go off on your own;
      you walk straight along the road He set.
   
How can a young person live a clean life?
      By carefully reading the map of Your Word.
   I'm single-minded in pursuit of You;
      don't let me miss the road signs You've posted.
   I've banked Your promises in the vault of my heart
      so I won't sin myself bankrupt.
   Be blessed, God;
      train me in Your ways of wise living.”

Psalm 119, 1-3 & 9-12, The Message
  


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Allison Egley 09/20/08
This is good. I love how you incorporated the names of the different games into the poem.
Verna Cole Mitchell 09/21/08
Creative way to present a very good message.
Kristen Hester09/22/08
What a GREAT message! I love all the game titles. That was very clever and much fun. Great job. Great Truth. Great!
Laura Anne Harrison09/24/08
How creative you are! The way you incorporated other games into the game of life great.[I remember most of the mentioned games.]
And the message that life is nothing without God is clear. Well done.
Shelley Ledfors 09/24/08
Very creative! I love how you used all the game titles, and laid out this piece.
Celeste Ammirata09/24/08
This is great! And oh so true. What a creative way to present this important message. I love the way you spelled out the game of life in the beginning, and ended it with how by following Christ is the only way to play. :-)
Karlene Jacobsen 09/24/08
And no one ever has a "monopoly" on the giftings God has given.

I am continuously amazed at the many facets of creativity displayed here. Yours is no exception.

Your use of game titles is great!
Dee Yoder 09/24/08
Ahhh...clever! I would have trouble thinking of all those game names! Very unique way to present the gospel message, and fun to read, too.
Chely Roach09/24/08
Super clever, and an on target message. Very cool.
Joshua Janoski09/24/08
How you came up with words that fit each letter so perfectly is beyond me. Always creative, and always a powerful message in your writing. Loved it!
Beth LaBuff 09/25/08
Wow, this is super creative with an amazing format! I enjoyed discovering all the game names used to bring out your superb message. Very, very nice!
Peter Stone10/02/08
Cute, Laura, and creative as usual. Loved the Bible verses too. We studied those same verses in Psalm 119 last night in our Bible study time.
Katrina 10/07/08
Great job! Staying focused on the right path is where the blessing is; very creative writing :-)
Tim Pickl10/25/08
May we make our lives a Jesus Pursuit! Well done.