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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: The Game of Life (09/11/08)

TITLE: Tommy’s First Lesson
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09/17/08


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Tommy entered the kitchen; his head bent forward to watch his feet as he went. His hair skimmed the underside of the bench as he cut the corner.

“Grandpa, can you help me tie my shoelaces, please?”

“Sure. Up we go.” He lifted his grandson onto a high kitchen chair.

“Grandpa, why is it so hard to learn how to tie shoelaces?”

“That’s a good question. Almost everything we learn in life can be hard to learn.”

“Why?”

“Because it’s part of learning.”

“Why?”

“Well, if everything was easy to learn in life there wouldn’t be any strength to our character.”

“Huh.”

Grandpa slowly looped a shoelace as Tommy watched. “Let me put it this way,” Grandpa continued as he twisted one end of the lace around the loop. “Do you remember when your daddy and I took you fishing last summer?”

“Yes.” Tommy’s face screwed up. “It was so hard to get the worms to stay on the hook and get the fish to bite them.”

“That’s right. Do you remember how many times you had to practise to get it right?”

“Lots,” the little boy nodded once and continued to study his grandfather’s hands.

“By the end of the weekend you had it just right and you caught the biggest fish for supper.”

Tommy’s face beamed and revealed a toothy grin. He let his foot drop and held up the other one.

“Your turn,” Grandpa encouraged.

Tommy wriggled his foot onto his other leg and concentrated on the shoe lace. It took a few minutes but eventually he made the final turn and pulled the loop through.

“There will be other things in life you will need to learn and they won’t be easy either.”

Tommy sat looking at his shoes while he listened. “Like what?”

“Oh, all sorts of things, like how to know the difference between right and wrong, when to make an important decision and how to choose which decision to make.”

“Why?”

“Because that’s life and we need to learn lots of things from tying shoelaces to how to fish. Making a decision when choosing what kind of friends we should have can be a tough one.”

“That sounds really hard. Will I have to learn how to talk to grandsons too?”

The old man laughed. “Yes, but not for a while yet; that’s a grow-up’s lesson. You can wait for that.”

“Look, Grandpa. We tie shoelaces the same. Maybe you practised lots too.”

“Yep, I practised lots too but some life lessons took longer to learn than others.”

“Can you teach me how to learn other life lessons, Grandpa?"

“I certainly can but right now... why don’t we have some ice-cream?”

Tommy giggled and his eyes shone. “I guess we don’t have to learn how to eat ice-cream.”


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Jan Ackerson 09/18/08
Sweet story! I just love grandfathers and grandsons together.

I'm assuming that Tommy's about 5--but some of the things he said, especially toward the end, seemed older than that age, at least to me.

Nice job of relating the shoelaces to real life!
Beth LaBuff 09/19/08
I enjoyed the simplicity of the shoelace (first) lesson. I could see the two leaning their heads together as they worked on tying this shoe. The ice-cream at the end adds such a heart-warming tough to this.
Irvine Saint-Vilus09/19/08
The grandfather's patience toward his grandson reminds me a bit of God's patience toward us in the things He has to teach us as his children. Good job.
Patricia Turner09/20/08
Awww...I love this little conversation about life's lessons. What sweet, well drawn characters. A very nice story.
Shelley Ledfors 09/21/08
Very sweet! I was right there with them, and loved the way grandpa used an everyday experience as a teaching moment. The only thing I had a hard time picturing was Tommy's hair skimming the underside of the bench. --Probably one of those international differences in wording or else a type of bench I wasn't picturing! :-)

I enjoyed this charming story!
Amy Michelle Wiley 09/21/08
Cute story! I especially liked the kid's comment about if he would need to learn to talk to grandkids--just like something a little kid would ask!
Julie Seeto09/22/08
What a great picture of a grandfather teaching his grandson about life. I love the wise and caring grandfather and the inquisitive child - well portrayed.
Scott Sheets09/22/08
It reminds me that we need to keep our eyes open for those teachable moments in life and take advantage of them. Thanks!
Gerald Shuler 09/24/08
Great story. I am trying to logically decide what the first lesson really was. It's not the shoelaces because he had already learned the worm on a hook lesson. I think the first lesson learned is that we must all learn lessons in life.

Well done.
Karlene Jacobsen 09/24/08
Tommy's first lesson is a lesson we are learning right now, (that there are always things to learn) and the lesson is tough, but passable.

Great lesson.
Celeste Ammirata09/24/08
This is very sweet. I like how the grandfather used the moment to plant seeds of thought in his grandson's sweet little mind. Great job!
Valarie Sullivan09/24/08
You hit it right on the head with the "why" questions. Must be a 5 year old!
Great job!
Chely Roach09/24/08
This was precious...I loved the little boy. Great job!


   
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