The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/08
Oh, this was very good. I love the contrast you painted between the two teams. Great job.
09/21/08
Wowzer--chill bumps. This is outstanding.
You have an excellent analogy with an outstanding message.
09/22/08
Excellent! This drew me right in. A terrific way to present the message. Well done!
I liked that the Coach stayed with them, guiding and sticking with them, no matter what. And the family standing behind her and not leaving, too.
Good job.
09/24/08
This was a very effective approach to the topic. Also, and encouragement for those of us who are "choling on the dust" of life.
09/24/08
Wowzers...awesome writing. I loved this!
10/02/08
Engaging contrast of those in the world seeking temporary riches, only to lose it, and those who come last, but receive it all at the end.