The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
Very good job intertwining the game with the "real life" situation. Well done!
09/18/08
This description is great, "A menacing sneer drew his gray lips back from yellowed fangs and from some deep recess he pulled a dry, mocking cackle, as arid and humorless as a desert plain." Then your descriptions of the "his players" and the chess game are chilling. Very good writing and excellent creativity!
09/23/08
As a lover of chess, your title drew me to your story and the unique perspective kept me reading. I was wondering where you would take me and I loved your thought provoking ending. Great Job!