The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good job intertwining the game with the "real life" situation. Well done!
This description is great, "A menacing sneer drew his gray lips back from yellowed fangs and from some deep recess he pulled a dry, mocking cackle, as arid and humorless as a desert plain." Then your descriptions of the "his players" and the chess game are chilling. Very good writing and excellent creativity!
As a lover of chess, your title drew me to your story and the unique perspective kept me reading. I was wondering where you would take me and I loved your thought provoking ending. Great Job!