The Official Writing Challenge
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I love nonconformist teens! They're so brave and cool.

You need paragraph spacing between each new speaker, even if they only say a few words.

Your characters are very compelling and I loved reading every word.
Yes, you have definitely summed up high school with "the jocks, the snobs, the nerds, the brains, the preppies, the class clowns, and the bullies" Your ending is great... I wished I could see the "Bernadette original design." :)