The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
I love nonconformist teens! They're so brave and cool.

You need paragraph spacing between each new speaker, even if they only say a few words.

Your characters are very compelling and I loved reading every word.
09/18/08
Yes, you have definitely summed up high school with "the jocks, the snobs, the nerds, the brains, the preppies, the class clowns, and the bullies" Your ending is great... I wished I could see the "Bernadette original design." :)