The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/08
I liked the contrast between the two sets of rules.

I'd suggest breaking the longer paragraphs into two or even three shorter ones, for great ease of readability.

The references to familiar gamepieces made this an enjoyable read.
09/18/08
Your title and your first paragraph are so thought provoking, especially when the "rules" seem to be blurred in our day. :( I enjoyed your insertion of "monopolies" and "balderdash" into this. :) I like what you wrote about the "opposing set of rules" that "they remain consistent" and that the "Creator desires winners."