The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/08
Very good descriptions. Well told. Petey didn't understand real life, thinking it a game. Why would a little child be made to watch this? Good job.
I love the double entendre of your title, and how the ending so deftly comments on the unrealistic messages that video games send to young people. Congratulations on placing 14th.