The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/08
Oh, this was great! I laughed the whole way through.

The Christian tie-in at the every end, while great, caught me "off guard." I wasn't expecting it from Brady Bunch characters. Maybe you could have sliped in a small reference earlier? It works the way you did it too though. :)

Plays and skits are very difficult to do within the word count. I know from experience! You did a great job with this one.
09/22/08
Good job with old TV characters. I could see them all, and you had Archie and Edith's accents down. Nicely done.
09/22/08
Cute! The opening section with Marcia and Bobby was fine, but I really enjoyed Archie and Edith (or should I say Orchie and Eee-dit?). I could just "hear" them!
09/24/08
Wow, perfect voice. Incredible creativity. I knew by your title that you were talking about the Bradys, and it reminded me of that episode. lol. I really and truly could hear and picture the Bunkers in my head. I learned a lot from this.
This is fun. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks r:-)